Hey this a poem i made very interesting

The Day I Knew...
The day I knew; We wouldnt last very long
Its like every hope
And every thought
Was broken; Was gone
Every plan; Every scheme
All the smiles that I smiled
Fade away from my head
Like a scared and lost child

The things that you did
And the things that you said
Made me feel so loved
But it was me, who was lead
You said you loved me
I thought that you cared
Of course I was wrong
You must have been scared

You leave me here broken
My heart has been shattered
Wonder when it will be whole
As the pieces are scattered
Will I be able to move on
Can I stop the tears from falling
These questions I cannot answer
Your name I am calling

So now as I think of all I've been through
The feelings,the thoughts, the questions, the tears
I realize that im worth more than this all
To the guy that hurt me I hope that he hears
I will be allright, you wont bring me down
I just want you to start knowing
That this heart of mine
Will always,always keep going


comment plz

its a very nice poem...n u're a very good writer...hope to read some more poems from you in the future.

Great poem and great poet
I am interested in the strength of the man in this poem, strongly and straightly

Hello Dzịt Mới,

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So now as I think of all I've been through
The feelings,the thoughts, the questions, the tears
I realize that im worth more than this all
To the guy that hurt me I hope that he hears
I will be allright, you wont bring me down
I just want you to start knowing
That this heart of mine
Will always,always keep going
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Very well exxpressed. The person who experiences hurt is the one who cares. I experienced it not too long ago. The difference is that a woman was involved. This is the line you should take with you to overcome the hurt.

I realize that im worth more than this all